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“First Love”
Everytime I feel you pass me by
Why does all the pain inside of me di e
I only crave you by my side
make all the cold in me warm
so that the fears will subside
and just be love in its natural form
everytime that i get close to you
you make me feel like i am see-through
help me to reach that special place
in the back of my mind
help me try to envision your dream
do you remember mine?
everytime i feel like nobody cares
i just imagine your there
your laughter fills me up
and i never feel alone again
your happiness holds me up
and suddenly i’m whole again
love me, i will always need you
love me, i will always want you
love me, i will always love you
please leave a comment…if you like
I think that the US should have bypassed international laws and just assasinated Saddam instead of bombing.
Great poem Jessica, very touching. As for Indy Tone what does assasinating Saddam have to do with Jessica’s poem?
Perhaps Indytone was making a mockery out of the subject title because it says “please leave opinions”…Pathetic really!
Yes, perhaps…. perhaps.
lol w/e Indy…I suspect my title was a litte misleading…sorries..thanks hells fury…;)
It is a touching poem
The title is very appropriate…isn´t that what we all think the first time we fall in love?, and you express it in such a beatiful way, thanks for sharing.
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awww….thanks science feeling… i <3 you! 😮